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soft and lovely
sweet and caring
he's my other half
I found my missing part
the other half
my addiction
He's my drug
he's the glue to my broken heart
he's making me feel useful
I belong in the word
I don't wanna die yet
I just wanna stay with meh man
~Always and Forever~
sweet and caring
he's my other half
I found my missing part
the other half
my addiction
He's my drug
he's the glue to my broken heart
he's making me feel useful
I belong in the word
I don't wanna die yet
I just wanna stay with meh man
~Always and Forever~
I LOVE YOU SWEETY
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I have one of those.
Bit of advice from one (learning) poet to another: you use "other half" twice, and it doesn't read well.
It could use some other general polishing, but it's very sweet.
Bit of advice from one (learning) poet to another: you use "other half" twice, and it doesn't read well.
It could use some other general polishing, but it's very sweet.